People sleep less than before in many countries. why people sleep less? what effect does it have individually and in society
Every person need to get good sleep to have a healthy life. In this modern era we are facing lot of distraction and leading to lack of sleep. These days we find several people suffering with Insomnia and leading an unhealthy life. In this essay will discuss about the sleep pattern and its consequences.
Due to rapid competition and work pressure people are unable to keep up there work life balance. Although there are several facilities to ease our work still we are lacking the minimum time of sleep. It is believed that in comparison to earlier time, we tend to have less physical exercise and spend most of the time sitting in between four walls of the office. People use their electronic gadgets before going to bed, due to the mobile screen rays, we loos our sleep. Hence we find it difficult to fall asleep early.
It is indeed true that an individual who has a sufficient sleep will deliver a efficient and productive results at work place. The lack of sleep will effect the output of the employee and resultingly impacts the memory. The growth of an Individual and society as a whole will have a great impact. Good Sleep has several health benefits. It has an major role on growth and development of the economy. Therefore it has a prime role in over all develoment.
In consideration of all factors, Sleep plays a vital role. In absence of the proper sleep, there are several disadvantage which has long lasting impact on health, Insomnia and memory of the individual. Hence good exercise and avoidance of gadgets can help to have a good sleep.
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...ble to keep up there work life balance. Although there are several facilities to ease ou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so, still, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1291.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69454545455 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50997086019 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549090909091 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.9463767532 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.7222222222 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2777777778 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.72222222222 7.06120827912 24% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262956915318 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0758787487044 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417605907181 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149227263838 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00817804929591 0.056905535591 14% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.33 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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