Nowadays, crime has become the hottest topic around the world. Many people think that the number of criminals would be decreased if they are given longer prison sentences. However, others said that there are other alternative solutions for reducing crime. In my point of view, I believe that the longer time in jail could not help reduce crime, there are other better ways.
On the one hand, giving longer prison sentences does wonder for the changes of criminals in the future. If they stay in jail longer, they would have more time to think about their actions and be repented in order to become good people when they are out. On top of that, volunteer activities play a pivotal role in prison, they will have more opportunities to pick up some jobs that they could do for their living in the future. As a case in point, there are a huge number of criminals who
On the other hand, there is a range of other solutions that are beneficial to drop the number of criminals. Firstly, the promotion of avoiding drugs gives rise to limit crime, those who are addicted to drugs usually try to be a thief to steal others' money in order to buy the new one for them. Moreover, thanks to the enhancement of the internet, teenagers are likely to spend more time on their social media, but this is a double-edged sword because they could observe many negative actions. Hence, the government should control the information which is posted on the Internet.
In conclusion, to be honest, the longer time in jail does not make criminals become good people after prison. The best way to reduce crime is trying to avoid it before it happens.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, moreover, so, in conclusion, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1345.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65397923875 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3474901238 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536332179931 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2666743899 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.461538462 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2307692308 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92307692308 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.359058035896 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133936665094 0.084324248473 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112477532395 0.0667982634062 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225927430221 0.151304729494 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127940802231 0.056905535591 225% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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