People who go to live in other countries, should follow the customs and tradition of the new country. To What extent do you agree or disagree?
Many people who travel from one country to another, may find themselves in a need to change some of their original traditions. So that they can follow customs of the new country. I strongly believe that coping with changes is a critical issue to safely adapt with a new place.
First, it is really important to respect the local traditions of every country. This is because local people who are living in these countries could feel offended, in case they found that their traditions are not well respected. For example, in Canada and unlike other country time is a valuable element, arriving on time for a casual or formal arrangements is very essential, to show your respect. If local traditions were not respected, it would have an offence impact on the locals.
Moreover, Middle-eastern countries have their own customs in the way the wear. For example, in Saudi Arabia women must wear long black dress and have their head covered by a vail. As a result, foreigner ladies should stick to this dress codes to avoid being questioned by the authorities. In contrast, many European countries are fighting and prohibiting the wear of vails
in public areas. Therefore, women who are not willing to take off their vails are not recommended to visit such countries.
To summaries, every country have its own tradition and culture that must be respected by outsiders. I really recommend the idea that everyone who is willing to relocate to a new country, must follow their own customs.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ange some of their original traditions. So that they can follow customs of the new coun...
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Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'recommended visiting'.
Suggestion: recommended visiting
...willing to take off their vails are not recommended to visit such countries. To summaries, every ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...country, must follow their own customs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, moreover, really, so, therefore, well, for example, in contrast, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1243.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93253968254 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63834580878 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59126984127 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.4848688798 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.7857142857 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188537712733 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.066686759297 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603968151597 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0990268263761 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428187798033 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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