There is often debate among people whether physical education or sport need to be mandatory for school going students or not. Although, somebody thinks against the adoption of these activities but in my opine it is extremely beneficial.
There are innumerable reasons to strictly implement the physical education and sport across schools and on the top of all is benefits related to health. Playing such outdoor games help the student to maintain a correct body shape. Even, practicing regularly not only help them to gain stamina but also taught them the importance of group behavior and team spirit. These life long lessons could not be learned from books and only self participation is the only way to learn. Moreover, acquiring physical education during this period could enable the students to know how health plays a vital role in life. By learning this, could help them to prevent their body from the challenges of getting old.
On the opposite angle, especially people who are not having a sound knowledge may believe scientific education is pivotal of all. They hold with the argument that wasting the precious time on such playing activities or health education could keep away the children's from placement opportunities. In turn, they might not earn well in their life. However, they are oblivious to the fact that sport and physical education too are the great source of income. Every year lacks of people are needed across the world as trainers and by learning exceptional skills in particular outdoor game could provide name and fame. As a matter of 'Messy' one of the eminent footballer was poor in academics but his love for football from his childhood had made it possible for him to enjoy an affluent life.
Considering and keenly examining all the above-cited information it can be implicated that sport and physical education are highly beneficial for people. This has to be a part of school curriculum not just for carriers perspective, but for maintaining good health too.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 365, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this life' or 'These lives'?
Suggestion: This life; These lives
...ance of group behavior and team spirit. These life long lessons could not be learned from ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, as to, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1675.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06042296073 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61875161192 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592145015106 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.3416816972 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.6875 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6875 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3125 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282664775586 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0881895840046 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0859544553288 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18751849786 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639380330976 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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