It is commonly witnessed that, in the present scenario, environment is being affected by the growth of a nation. I strongly agree with the given notion and the relevent reasons of this will be discussed in the following paragraphs.
To commence with, the first and foremost reason is industrialisation. It is irrefutable that majority of the organisations are taking place in developing areas,which are residential and commercial. When the operations are performed in industries in order to prepare products, the toxic fumes of the chemicals gets mixes into the air and pollutes the air. The waste materials are also thrown into the rivers, open areas. It also has detrimental impacts on ecosystem. Therefore, setup of industries is a major cause of it.
Furthermore, the use of plastic bags is a big threat for biology too. Most of the shops and online market stores delivers commodities like vegetables, fruits, medicines and many more in portable bags. The excess use of plastic has negative effects not only on individuals but also on wild-life and marine life if plastic is consumed by animals and sea animals. It does not dissolve as a food as it is a non-biodegradable resource. For example, a recent conducted by an eminent ecologist at Oxford University revealed that over 60% of the marine animals are dying out annually since plastic does not dissolve when they swallow it.
To be more specific, deforestation is another concern. In terms of constructing new houses, sky-scrappers, apartments and flats, wood is used to make furniture and other interior. The cutting rate of trees is increasing at an alarming rate, which leads to the destruction of nests and habitats of animals. Wild animals and birds tend to migrate to other places rather than their native regions to preserve themselves. Thus, it has negative impacts on their living.
To conclude, although the development of a country brings prosperity and harmony among individuals, but the factors such as deforestation, plastic use, industrialisation are becoming an obstacle for ecology.
- Many families move to different countries Some people think children can benefit from this while others consider it is hard for children if families move to a foreign country Discuss both views and your opinion 89
- Your child is going on a three day school trip to another country The head teacher wants to find parents to go with the group and you would like to go Write a letter to the head teacher In your letter Say why you would like to go on the trip Suggest what 73
- ou want to arrange a conference for your company and you need to ask one of your colleagues to give a presentation in this conference Write a letter to your colleague In your letter include Details about the conference Why you want your colleague to give 73
- Nowadays more tasks at home and work are being performed by robots why do you think it is happening Is it negative or positive development 78
- Some people think that children should be encouraged to play outdoor games that require physical activit instead of playing computer games in the home Do you agree or disagree 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 160, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , which
...ons are taking place in developing areas,which are residential and commercial. When th...
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Line 5, column 386, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'food'.
Suggestion: food
...nd sea animals. It does not dissolve as a food as it is a non-biodegradable resource. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, therefore, thus, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1739.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22222222222 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13361025128 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615615615616 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 558.9 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.3698241592 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5263157895 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5263157895 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0964819912144 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0242123398821 0.084324248473 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0309386024016 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0563229543029 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355253177979 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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