Positive News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. What is your opinion about this?
Graphical depiction of news stories on television as well as newspapers is a common practice nowadays. Many people believe that a story with its relative image is more effective compared to a mundane paragraph of words and I strongly concur with this statement. This essay will further elaborate my viewpoint in detail
Reading each and every word of a news article is a tedious and time consuming activity. In addition, everyone in this turbulent society is busy maintaining a work life balance So, reading a cover story or a news report seems a daunting task. For instance, in older days people used to devote special hours to read news and listen to the radio for the important information but this is not the case anymore. However introducing some pictures and describing statistics in the form of charts and diagrams could make the news a bit exciting
The advancement of technology has made the news world more fascinating than ever. When a newspaper describes an article with an image, it attracts more readers Moreover, news channels have an added benefit of using audio visuals and thus emphasizing on more important event become an easy task. For example, the demographics of covid 19 positive patients are displayed in the foon of tables and graphs rather than lengthy reports. The impact of these huge figures of increasing cases is more effective in generating seriousness among the people around the world.
All in all, in my opinion a description of a news event along with some virtual pictures makes it more captivating. This will lures more people to focus on news and helpful in spreading awareness regarding day to day events occurring in their surroundings as well as in the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, in addition, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90243902439 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69107771315 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595818815331 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 287.0 20.2975951904 1414% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1407.0 106.682146367 1319% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 287.0 20.7667163134 1382% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 120.0 7.06120827912 1699% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301941129153 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.301941129153 0.084324248473 358% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171268305617 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0128133288626 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 145.1 13.0946893788 1108% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -219.83 50.2224549098 -438% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 115.2 11.3001002004 1019% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.62 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 22.66 8.58950901804 264% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 54.0 9.78957915832 552% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 116.8 10.1190380762 1154% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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