Over recent years, Global warming is the huge daunting issue to this globe due to undue activities by the human beings, which lead to ponder, is this world going to upshot? And certain reasons why it is occurred and how to fix it are summarized below
First and foremost, raising population is the prominent reason to people move on to locate their living places, which pave the way to deforestation, extinct of plenty of valuable species and changes to unpredictable weather condition. Furthermore, the abundant usage of malicious products like plastics and fertilizers cause to barren land, which will completely devastate the agriculture.
In addition this, by this continuous deeds cause for melting glaciers in snow region, which is lead to increasing the sea level and through this phenomenon likely to encounter another mammoth changes in coastal frontier by perishing the existing area. Besides, the ground water level is getting too low, for instance, in Germany, they insisted the rule for the utilization water from 50 litre to 30 litre per head in one day on two months ago due to the lacking of water.
To preclude this, the government should cultivate plenty of plants and originate the forest for avoid the irregular climate changes, and introducing some awareness program to illustrate the importance of afforestation amid the people, more over, implementing certain new form of houses like skyscrapers building to reduce the utilization of land. Above all, introduce the usage of recycled products will definitely deter the catastrophe.
To conclude this, if people imitate the law and mingle with nature, they would feel the every moment of living in this earth as a paradise, and also, can provide the wholesome life to next generation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'litre' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'litres'.
Suggestion: litres
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'litre' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'litres'.
Suggestion: litres
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, furthermore, if, so, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1483.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20350877193 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76304594594 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645614035088 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.9001544675 49.4020404114 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 185.375 106.682146367 174% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.625 20.7667163134 172% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0715251180331 0.244688304435 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0266616566347 0.084324248473 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0388695949347 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0399409507387 0.151304729494 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0564490738386 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.9 13.0946893788 160% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.95 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.41 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 10.7795591182 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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