The perspective of shopping is totally changed among the end-users as they prefer to visit the lavish shopping complexes in place of the low scale shops specially in the metro-cities. This essay completely agree with this thought because it increase the accessibility of different services at one place as well as the comparison becomes easier of different goods.
The construction of the high-end malls across the developed cities drastically increased the foot count of the customer towards them rather than visiting the local markets. People prefer to spend their leisure time in the shopping centers as they have easy access to different stores like clothing brands, supermarkets, playing zones etc at one place which reduces the hassle of travelling. For Instance, Dubai mall is the largest mall across world which comprises of Carrefore supermarket to do household and grocery shopping, all brands for garment shopping, playing zones for kids, electronic stores for gadget shopping.
Furthermore, as the consumer prefer to always compare the prices at different stores before buying any items or goods. This become easier inside these malls as we can roam around different stores and select the best option with cheaper price easily which is not possible in the low scale market where shops are far from each other. For example, a survey is done in Seattle city to check the footfall vs actual purchase in the cosmo store and the end results shows that most of the people were comparing the prices and the offer across different stores.
The closure of home-grown shops due to the expansion of the retail market in shopping complexes become very obvious as the benefits outweighs it. These developments directly impact our economy as it attracts more and more people to do purchasing which indirectly means more collection of value added tax which goes to government for the services hence in my view this is better for any country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 242, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'increases'?
Suggestion: increases
...tely agree with this thought because it increase the accessibility of different services...
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Line 2, column 455, Rule ID: COMPRISES_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comprises' or 'consists of'?
Suggestion: comprises; consists of
... is the largest mall across world which comprises of Carrefore supermarket to do household a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, if, so, well, for example, for instance, as well as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1627.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13249211356 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58749316115 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589905362776 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 38.5699364791 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 162.7 106.682146367 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.7 20.7667163134 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.3 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20263061491 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0807684961747 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0613863941887 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126650719454 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.046673566542 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 13.0946893788 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.07 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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