Shopping is now one of the most popular forms of leisure activity in many countries for young adults. Why this? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
It is true that shopping becomes a famous leisure activity among many youngsters across various nations. One the most important reasons is globalization, which helps market to get latest products across countries. In my view, this trend is positive development considering the knowledge they gain as well as it will improv nation's economy to a great extent.
Firstly, some adults want to engross their knowledge to create awareness on the latest models in dresses, gadgets and ornaments etc. For example, at the moment many college goers learn new ornament designs from the market and they start their own firms which is creating many job opportunities. Secondly, shopping requires very less cost when compared to other leisure activities such as travelling and photography. Finally, during shopping some people tend to find new friends of same interest, which will could potentially help their personal life.
When youngsters do shopping, this will help them to do financial planning which is considered to be important skills in everyone's life. For instance, during my college days I used to do shopping with less money which requires many research and budgeting. This skill is helping me now when I divide budget for various projects. Furthermore, knowing our country's economy starts from our local markets, therefore, it is vital for youngsters to do shopping to know market trends. In addition, when youngsters do shop this will help money circulation among traders, which will aid to grow nation's economy in all aspects.
In conclusion, youngsters spend their leisure activity in shopping is a positive development for the growth of the country, also when adults do shop this will help them to do monetary planning which is key a skill for their career.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 177, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'get the latest'.
Suggestion: get the latest
...is globalization, which helps market to get latest products across countries. In my view, ...
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Line 5, column 227, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[2]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun research seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much research', 'a good deal of research'.
Suggestion: much research; a good deal of research
...shopping with less money which requires many research and budgeting. This skill is helping me...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my view, it is true, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23591549296 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70309496254 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556338028169 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5632614102 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.384615385 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8461538462 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.6923076923 7.06120827912 222% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268697197578 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.099997629272 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603079179125 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182487390414 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0635860980506 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.