In USA, Government implement curfew in some areas for restricting teenagers from going outside without adults. While adult supervision is necessary to save teenagers from harm at night, it is also possible that too much supervision may cause some mental health issues for teenagers. This essay will discuss why adult supervision is needed for teenagers if they want to go outside at night.
Safety of a teenager is a big issue for a parent which often gets compromised at night. A lot of crimes happen at night and teenage boys and girls are most likely to fall victim of it. Sometimes drug addicts and criminals target teenagers so that they can abduct them and demand ransom from their parents Teenagers are also attracted to activities which can be harmful for them such as taking drugs and underage drinking. For examples, In USA, a lot of teenagers die because of drug overdose. In addition, a lot of accidents happens at night because of drunk driving and teenagers are most likely to cause those accidents. A strong adult supervision will prevent the teenagers from doing these harmful activities. A strong presence of an adult will also scare the criminal and drug addicts and they will hesitate to kidnap any teenager
On the other hand, too much restrictions can cause some mental health issues to teenagers. A lot of teenagers get anxious if their parents start monitoring their every move. Teenagers need some time without adult supervision which they can use for activities such as playing at the street and making up songs and dances.
Imposing curfews can be beneficial for teenagers since it will prevent something bad happen to them. Adult supervisions on teenagers can protect them from crimes and bad companies however too much supervision can cause some negative impacts on teenagers. Since teenagers are too young to decide what is right and what is wrong, they need the care and protection of adults.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 24, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
... any teenager On the other hand, too much restrictions can cause some mental heal...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, while, as for, for example, in addition, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1611.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98761609907 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58538216542 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.49226006192 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1624144137 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.4 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5333333333 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220165978233 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0920023439408 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0390745698808 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150384495351 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0230004580802 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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