If there is no doubt that graduates have an edge over other appicants, it is also that having a degree is not enough. In the wake of this fact, graduates have to add value to their curriculum developing some extra traits employers value at most, like focus, problem solving, energy and interpersonal skills. The results of a survey conducted among business owners found out that too many newbies lack of communication abilities which are critical when it comes to developing an efficient working place.
Clear communciation is crucial to running a business smoothly. Lack of clarity leads inevitably to misunderdtandings that can negatively affect a company and in turn has a detrimental impact on its revenue and financial stability. Givent that abilities like public speaking and effective communication have become more and more requested over the last years, universities are making a priority to offer courses about communicationto attract students and to prepare them for the challenges brought about by the 21sth century economy.
The reasons which lead to a lack of interpersonals skills are several and can be linked to the technological development of the last decades. The digital revolution that has made our life more comfortable has its downsides too. For example, it has become commonplace nowadays to send emails to our collegues rather than to speak with them. Although this can be a good practice, since it is basically faster and can be traced, it can be tricky as well. Sometimes it happens that emails are not read so that something important, like a deadline, can be missed. Sometimes a simple conversation it is still the best way to communicate.
To tackle the problem, companies should invest more resources in developing programs aimed to improve the communciation level inside the work place. Furthermore, employees should play their part too, by avoiding exaggerate use of digital tool, like emails or testing and rely more on personal talking.
- Adults do very less exercise these days Some people think that showing sporting events on the television such as Olympics and international tournaments can be the best way to encourage adults to do exercise Others believe there are other effective ways to 84
- Many people want to have a successful career and a happy family life both What problems are involved in combining a career and family life How to overcome such problems 89
- The best way to reduce crime among young people is to teach parents good parenting skills To what extent do you agree with this statement Give your own opinion and examples 89
- Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as unsatifactory job or shortage of money Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations Discuss both views and give your opinion 73
- Some people think the government should pay for healthcare and education but other people claim that it is the individual s responsibility Discuss both views and give your opinion 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, still, well, for example, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1663.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2131661442 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00374336934 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614420062696 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.3264920003 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.785714286 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7857142857 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35714285714 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202336429209 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0578844693938 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485785848784 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102929055443 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503282835909 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.