In contemporary epoch, uniform have been playing crucial role for enterprise. It is rgued by some people that whether wearing uniform to employees are required or not. I would discuss not merely merits but also demerits of it in the forthcoming paragraphs with conclusion at last.
To embark, the first and the foremost advantage of it is: not only employees will recognise their tremnedous post in their company, but also staff would enhance the reputation of the corporation among the folks by leaps and bounds. For instance, nowadays, people, who are working either worker or manger, wear informal clothes. If staffs would wear a particular uniform including label of company as well as uniform code, employees would identify their post in firms easily, since formal clothes, along with tie would be weared by the manager of the business. Whereas, labourer are not wearing tie as well. Consequently, it is beneficial for individual besides enterprise.
However, there are some disadvantages that staffs would not concentrate ontheir essesntiol works which are playing pivotal role for corporation. To illustrate, uniform of the company have been weared by employees on daily basis. Most of the staffs will fill uncomfortable in particular uniform. Due to that, individuals would fill boredom. Thus, staffs might be concentrated on the indispencable work of the office. As a result, it might be affected on spectacular business. Moreover, it might be fatal for workmen who are working on marvellous machine. For example, majority of the enterprise will offer to wear tie during the working day. If workmen will wear tie inspite of doing work on machine, it might be came inside the machine. Hence, it may be hazardious for labourers.
To recapitulate, I personally aver that although uniform of compnay have been playing significant role for it, weaknesses are more vis a vis strengths.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, thus, well, whereas, for example, for instance, in particular, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1594.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24342105263 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88562411335 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546052631579 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.7389813482 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.8947368421 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.73684210526 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.369397556889 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108763024626 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105448898567 0.0667982634062 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217946191019 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0839016311412 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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