In some countries employees are generally given two weeks of paid vacation time each year. In other countries employers are given four or six weeks of paid vacation time.
Considering the need of both employee and employer, what do you think is a reasonable amount of paid vacation time for employees to have? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
Employees are authorized to take time off under labour law. In some countries, two weeks of paid vacations are given to workers while others give four to six weeks paid time off. I think two weeks of paid vacations are enough from both employee & employer’s perspective.
Firstly, Annual vacations that employees get, are in addition to national & public holidays. On average, combining all national & public holidays totals to about four weeks of days off from work. Adding additional two weeks of annual leaves, these go up to six weeks each year. These days off from work are enough to fulfil employee’s needs.
Secondly, Employer pays salary to employee for days off. Employer pays not only for these two weeks but also four weeks of statutory holidays without getting any work in return. This burden of wages without any contribution is enough for employer. Some countries do give leaves of four or six weeks, it further increases burden of wages on employer and thus lowers profitability.
In some countries, workers are given four to six weeks of paid vacation time. They believe that more time off from work will help employee relax from day to day routine. It will help him in increasing efficiency but I disagree. According to one research, too much time away from job makes a person looses his/her focus and results in list complecency in work and thus less efficiency.
In today’s fast paced world, time is money. Taking four or six weeks away from job affects not only company’s profitability but economy as a whole.
Last year, I went on vacation to Thailand for twelve days. I was able to complete my wish list in just seven days. I tried to relax for remaining days but I got bored on 10th day.
In my opinion as well as from my experience, I think two weeks are enough vacation time. This not only keeps employee’s focus intact but also helps employer to maintain profitability. Higher profits means higher taxes, and thus whole economy becomes beneficiary.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, i think, in addition, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1679.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9674556213 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73141299582 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511834319527 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.2690855104 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.0 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6956521739 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.409110129971 0.244688304435 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121810697719 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129691195489 0.0667982634062 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199607907513 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.141591789612 0.056905535591 249% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.95 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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