In today's scenario, to bear the individual expenses, it is advisable for teenagers to do a part time job. Many western countries have this trend, which helps a teenage to take responsibility of their own expenses. Though it has its own pros and cons.
The most important thing of doing a part-time job as a teenager is, understanding one's responsibility and the importance of money. For e.g they will know how difficult it is to earn and how judiciously one should spend the money. Also, it helps to grow and mature as a person independently. Although some do disagree on this.
During teenagers academic period, it gets difficult for some to do study and work both. As it may exhaust them. The time management becomes very important, which may make parents worried about their academic performance. All the students are not same, some may require more hard work than others, so managing job as well as studies simultaneously, becomes difficult for most of the teenagers. Other option for taking up a part- time job could be during their vacation period.
Taking up a part time work during students vacation proves much beneficial, as they can become engage and can use that time period in learning new things. Instead of sitting at home and spending time on gaming and social media this kind of activity may help individual to grow immensely for futuristic roles.
So in the end, i would conclude that,though part time job offers a great role in an individual development, but due to the fear of poor academic performance, one might not consider it as a good thing. But during non academic period this proves to be of great importance.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: part-time
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, well, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1367.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8475177305 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79732396715 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581560283688 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.5132163543 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.4375 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.625 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0625 7.06120827912 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200314884451 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0638779625771 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0578941959075 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11194280361 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0272736567039 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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