It is an obvious truth that fast foods can be found easily everywhere. But, they are people who choose to have fast foods or not.
There are a lot items which are related to being overweight. For example, these days people are consuming convenience food more and more without paying attention to its side effects. According to scientific researches, fast foods include a huge amount of salt and fat that are so harmful and can lead to obesity.
In addition, as we are witnessing, people have no more tendency for exercising. They just prefer to follow a sedentary lifestyle rather than being active and going to club that can lead to being obese.
The other vital item that must be considered is about psychological features. It has been proven that people who are more stressed are more probable to suffer from obesity.
I strongly believe the most crucial reason for being fat in children is because of the wrong habits that are rooted in childhood. So, families can be blamed more than anything else because they are the role of kids in future. For example, most families are have to go out most of the times because of not having enough time for making homemade foods that lead to being overweight day by day. Also, some companies that advertise their useless products illegally are responsible for that.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... who choose to have fast foods or not. There are a lot items which are related ...
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Line 9, column 216, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... else because they are the role of kids in future. For example, most families are have to...
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Line 9, column 258, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
... future. For example, most families are have to go out most of the times because of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, for example, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1096.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 227.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8281938326 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45908118713 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603524229075 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 351.0 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.5275120847 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.3076923077 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4615384615 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.30769230769 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132417463857 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0523570457112 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434241621452 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0846720245812 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466760805148 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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