In some countries, the ownership of people's home is an important matter. In these countries it is very important to own your own home rather than renting it. It might be indifferent for some, but for these people it matter.
Why is that case? you might wonder. I think it is because your home is supposed to be exactly what it sounds like, your home. As a human I think we long after having stuff to call our own, doesnot matter what it is, but humans always want to claim ownership. This is nothing new and it has been like this through human history, like colonies for example, which later once again became the same country as lead by its own habitants. People will always want to be the one os decide what happens to them and when you rent your home you cannot even paint it without the owners permission.
If you as a person are renting an apartment there might be a lot of stressors in your life. A scratched wall can cause you a major headec, because the wall was not yours. The bedeoom you are currently sleeping in might not be available as long as you hope, things happen in life and maybe the next landlord won't to have you as a tenant.
In other perspective, not owning your home could be a relief when it comes to your financen As a renter you wouldnot have to worry about the house market crashing or natural disaster destroying your expensive home.
Bottom line, as a human I feel like we need to have a home and calling it you own can make that more special. I personally would rather own my house, because then whatever happens it is on me and no one else.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 217, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'matters'?
Suggestion: matters
...erent for some, but for these people it matter. Why is that case? you might wonder. I...
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Line 2, column 18, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
...se people it matter. Why is that case? you might wonder. I think it is because you...
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Line 2, column 566, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'owners'' or 'owner's'?
Suggestion: owners'; owner's
...me you cannot even paint it without the owners permission. If you as a person are ren...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, then, for example, i feel, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 48.0 24.0651302605 199% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1281.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.31313131313 5.12529762239 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25978858452 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56228956229 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3824773581 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.4 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.46666666667 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31908031122 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113575415922 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138948409664 0.0667982634062 208% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202146590989 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.208282312609 0.056905535591 366% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.0946893788 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.72 12.4159519038 62% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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