Some people believe that to be successful at a sport you need natural ability and others think that hard work and practice can make you successful. Discuss both views and give your opinion
It is thought by many people that a person should have inborn skills in order to get success in sports, while others disapprove of this statement and argue that any individual with perseverance and diligence can be an expert player. However, i support the later notion for numerous reasons.
To embark with, the people who hold the view that natural capabilities are mandatory to become a well-known sportsperson because there have been myriads of people who became an overnight sensation for their special qualities at a certain sport, Whereas there are many who could not achieve a flourishing career in sports even after several trainings and consistent attempts. To cite an example, in a basketball game, a player has to be taller, and that is something that can not be achieved by any practice or hard work.
On the flip-side, undoubtedly, when people support the fact that determination and hands-on experience can make an individual successful at any sports, it is true for certain games as without working hard and polishing the existing expertise, no one can climb a ladder of prosperity in any realm. We have witnessed a number of players who succeeded in sports with their tough spirit and constant practice, and this is the prime reason why parents these days invigorate their children to participate in sports events from a very young age.
In conclusion, while it is true that champions are born with a distinct talent, extra efforts and discipline make an individual great athlete. Not only this but also inspire many others to work hard and grow their skills.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 243, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, well, whereas, while, as to, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1336.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06060606061 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72651241506 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609848484848 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 102.326606389 49.4020404114 207% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 167.0 106.682146367 157% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.0 20.7667163134 159% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.75 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194155164259 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0814881396236 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530103619617 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115045699325 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350349931826 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.9 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.66 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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