The proper way to punish the murderers is by applying a death sentence as an effect of a serious crime that was ever undertaken, meanwhile it is assumed highly hazardous as it contradicts human rights.
The practice of death sentence tends to be more controlling, preventing continual crimes. The death sentence will extremely restrain the perpetrators or the potential doers to stop killing humans because the existence of perpetrators will end immediately. For instance, in India, the rate of murderers went down 25% at the end of 2019 as the policy to death sentence started to be enforced, compared to the last five years there were threefold cases that continually committed because every murderer did not get feasible punishment that induced to sustainable behavior. Therefore, the imposition of the death penalty must be implemented because it can stop murder cases increase.
However, for some people, enforcing the death penalty for murderers is not a good choice because the justice must see human rights who have the right to live, and this is inhumane. Therefore, criminals can realize their mistakes, and time will be given to them to correct the mistakes that have been made. For instance, in the US, a child who kills his mother is immediately arrested because the court finds out what happened to the perpetrator, and that the criminal has been depressed since childhood. Therefore, the child is given a prison sentence and handled by a psychiatric specialist so that the child gets recovery and is aware of his actions.
In conclusion, the serious effect exerted on the killer is emphasized even more. However, the justice should notice human right due to murderers can repent. Can government waive the serious effect of the death penalty without seeing human rights?
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- Some people buy local products while others prefer international products Do you agree or disagree 67
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- The two maps below show an island before and after the construction of some tourist facilities Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 91, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ntrolling, preventing continual crimes. The death sentence will extremely restrain ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1502.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14383561644 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7615993283 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558219178082 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.3054799143 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.166666667 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105051364714 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0412769654324 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0232009454633 0.0667982634062 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0645005343195 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0047144394351 0.056905535591 8% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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