Some people believe that modern high technology is transforming the way we work and is benefit to all of society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
it is believed that development in new technology is changing the assistance that had for the society and making the work easier for humans. I completely agree to the above statement because it could bring us convenience and comfort with added dangers which are worth noticing. communication made easy now due to advent of mobile phones and mortality rate can be controlled now with the use of cutting edge technologies which can save and prolong people's life.
To begin with, earlier those were the days where mails and post offices were crowded to send letter to their loved ones which was involved with strain and stress and everyone had to travel themselves to convey any discreet information as there was no communication among one and another. For example, recently telegram was completely closed which served as emergency message transfer service 20 years ago until last year as its customers are now addicted to using instant messaging apps and calls. this shows how far technology has come and still it can takeover many such services in near future.
To make it icing on the cake, health conditions are improved dramatically since a decade as robotics and modern equipment can now cure unknown disease at a touch of screen and even carcinomas can be cured by cyberarc radiation. if this continues the mortality rate can be controlled as never before and no one can anticipate this growth that technology might take. For instance, recently innovated microcapsules can precisely target the cancerous growth cells and kill them and cure disease and these capsules can be just administered as regular tablets.
In conclusion, although techonlogy has come this far it might impact jobs in the near future as the artificial intelligence might replace numerous jobs. So, if we use it in a limit we can experience its wonders and should also be careful on their advancements
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, still, for example, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1583.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07371794872 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72452488183 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634615384615 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.6254226129 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.909090909 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3636363636 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.90909090909 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0647632600077 0.244688304435 26% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0281462365895 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0287447316375 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0421336899224 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0316791861527 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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