Museums and art galleries act as an intermediate between the ages. A large number of individuals believe that museums and art galleries should be opened without cost for minors. In my opinion,I agree with this notion, because the minors can easily thorough insights into stories of the ancient times.
To begin with, there are prominent reasons behind free museums facility but, one of the main reason is that the minors can easily enhance the knowledge about the vintage works, then they can able to transform their mind experience regarding to ancestors. For an instance, in China, the government allows the free facilities of art galleries mainly to minors, because these authorities want to ameliorate the knowledge of yester times in the children who below 18 years of age. Consequently, it is act as an efficacious way to elevate the importance of ancient works.
In addition to this, the stories of God fathers can be easily provided to minors through museums and art galleries facilities. As, different things are showcased in museums which can help the minors to get to know about the bad and good experiences of ancestors that can automatically enhance the inspiration level in minors. For example, in Amritsar state of India, a museum has opened which provides the knowledge about the influentional ancestors freely to minors. It is therefore clear that art galleries can help to make better contact of minors with ancient times.
To conclude, museums and art galleries are considered as an indispensable part in the children 's life.Although, free facilities can little bit affect the economy situation but still, the minors can either increase their knowledge about their ancestors or also follow ancient times' rules and regulations.
- Many people con of choose to study at university in another country. What kind of problems do you think they would encounter and what are the positive aspects of a decision like this? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from you 61
- Most modern families have both parents working and as a result children spend less and less time with their parents.What is the reason for this?What problems can this cause? 67
- Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 56
- the graph below shows the number of enquiries received by Tourist Information Office in one city a six-month period in 2011 56
- the graph below shows the number of enquiries received by Tourist Information Office in one city a six-month period in 2011 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, regarding, so, still, then, therefore, for example, in addition, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1472.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20141342756 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80323168058 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540636042403 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.9966711811 49.4020404114 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.818181818 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7272727273 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0909090909 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144266618272 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.06583478755 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0692475623694 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0995017627161 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0439243680112 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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