Some people believe that no one should be allowed to continue working after age 65. However, others say there should not be a limitation on age and anyone should be allowed to work regardless of their age. Discuss both views, and give your opinion and include relevant examples.
Many different rules and regulations exist beyond the retirement age and it has been at the center of the global debates that whether it is true action to determine retirement age or not? Many believe that employees should be retired while they approach the retirement age which is 65; however, others declare outright hostility to this attitude as people desire to work until whenever they want.
On the one hand, many note that it is essential to stop old worker, who reach the retirement age, from working because this action brings about considerable advantages not only for individuals but also for society as a whole. It is because, firstly, retired employees can reap the reward of their lifelong service by receiving both the retirement benefits and the pension. Secondly, when retired employees leave a company, they are replaced by young, updated and enthusiastic employees which leads to knock-on impact on the company‘s atmosphere. Finally, youngster finds more job opportunities as, according to the survey, the rate of the unemployment decline while many old workers retired annually.
On the other hand, many advocate people's right to work until whenever they want. They believe retirement have not beneficial influence on neither the employee nor the society. For the elderly, their health might be threatened due to stay at home lonely without much interaction. It also believed that retirement utterly contradicts with social mobility, leading to depression, or other mental ailments. Besides, retirement also means losing experienced employees who acquaint with the responsibilities of the professions. As it is clear both company and employees would be hurt due to the retirement.
To sum up, I believe, neither retire the elderly nor keep them forever cannot be a good idea. Alternatively, it is better to keep veteran as a part-time employee so that not only does company maintain its experienced employee, but also the employee can take a role in society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 2, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'Many'.
Suggestion: Many
Many different rules and regulations exist beyond the ...
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Line 3, column 19, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun note seems to be countable; consider using: 'many notes'.
Suggestion: many notes
...henever they want. On the one hand, many note that it is essential to stop old worker...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, while, it is true, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1682.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30599369085 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89310738756 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589905362776 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3629602115 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.142857143 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6428571429 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164523492996 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598429581852 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640714768555 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108864558895 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.076463204632 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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