Technology has developed faster recently and caused many options to emerge. I personally agree that today people have too many alternatives in life. This essay will discuss the effects caused by the situation of having too many options.
Firstly, having too many choices in life will only cause people to be more extravagant. For the example, numbers of online shops have grown faster today, ranging from online clothing shops to online home furniture shops. This can causes people to be more thrifty, because people will have more flexibility in browsing numerous things. As a consequence, people will end up with buying many things, including the unnecessary ones. If there were not too many online shops available, people would have not been that extravagant.
Secondly, the emergence of variety of options in people's life will lead to laziness and reluctance to struggle. For instance, there are many online transportation applications developed recently, that offer online taxi services at reachable fares. This has made them became less-motivated to learn how to drive, because the online taxis services has helped them to travel anywhere. If there was only limited number of online taxi services, people would have always tried learning to drive.
In conclusion, having too many alternatives in life will only cause people to be more thrifty and lazy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 231, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'cause'
Suggestion: cause
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1151.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 217.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30414746544 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65232895832 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557603686636 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 375.3 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.314392834 49.4020404114 41% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.5384615385 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6923076923 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.30769230769 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211000410022 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100953102884 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0691348883241 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157258031352 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0603328058734 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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