In this modern world we have been benefited with varied choices. This endless choices have by default created a catastrophe in every individuals mind. While the change which has been ever evolving led us to this situation. As humans we have the tendency to never be contended with things around.
Initially if we look around, as we talk about our daily necessitates for instance food. While we have umpteen number of restaurants available near our places in today's scenario. Earlier it would be hardly one or two restaurants which provided different cuisines. This is also been caused by the people who are involve in migrating from one place from another in search of better carrier opportunities. Such as Chinese as we see a lot a Chinese restaurants have been boomed up and are now available at every nock and corner of every city, town or country.
secondly this plethora number of choices has also led to more conflicts among people. As for an example if we talk about a family going out for a family vacation the choices of adults in the family would be varying from the children or teens present in the family. Therefore leading to this distinctive view points and a lot of travelling destinations is the impact of the current scenario. Furthermore we can also observe that, in earlier days people never use to have any baby products available as they never existed in the market. On the contrary , these days we have supermarkets which is been stuffed with baby food, dippers and many more products which one can ever think of.
To my conclusion i feel the bewilderness will be remaining the same in years to come beacasue of technological changes and science evolution.
- Today more people are travelling than ever before.Why is this the case?What are the benefits of travelling for the traveller? 56
- Everybody should be allowed admission to university study programs regardless of their level of academic ability.agree or disagree?Give reasons and example. 73
- Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development? 61
- Students in school and university learn far more by lessons with their teachers compared to other sources(example: television and internet). Do you agree or disagree? 78
- With a fast pace of modern life more and more people towards fast food for their main meals.Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... catastrophe in every individuals mind. While the change which has been ever evolving...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ever evolving led us to this situation. As humans we have the tendency to never be...
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Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...r daily necessitates for instance food. While we have umpteen number of restaurants a...
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Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'involved'.
Suggestion: involved
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'restaurant'?
Suggestion: restaurant
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Suggestion: Secondly
...rner of every city, town or country. secondly this plethora number of choices has als...
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Suggestion: Therefore,
...hildren or teens present in the family. Therefore leading to this distinctive view points...
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Suggestion: Furthermore,
... is the impact of the current scenario. Furthermore we can also observe that, in earlier da...
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Suggestion: ,
...r existed in the market. On the contrary , these days we have supermarkets which i...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... can ever think of. To my conclusion i feel the bewilderness will be remaining...
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Suggestion:
...ological changes and science evolution.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, as for, for instance, i feel, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1400.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84429065744 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67419073293 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570934256055 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3882591955 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3333333333 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2666666667 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163292735892 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0590961382146 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419415201857 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0940617663941 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0599326117864 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.