Whether a person’s happiness is associated with the high economy or other things? It is believed by a certain section of society that economically strong is the primitive reason for happiness; however, I stand with others who opine that other aspects which matter for a happy life.
People tend to believe that being financially rich is one of the greatest ways to be happy in life. Owing to the fact that if people are financially strong, they are able to buy anything, and can easily settle down in their lives. Therefore, the desires and demands are easily completed, which gives them pleasure. Not only this gives them a luxurious lifestyle, but also they get status in society. To cite an example, a survey conducted by National Commercial Organization in India, in 2013, revealed that out of 100, 70% of people had a monotonous routine to earn more money especially to get a fixed salary every month instead of doing an interesting job as per their choice.
Nevertheless, own satisfaction is one of the major factors to be live in pleasure. This is because individuals do their tasks which they find fascinating and wants to be excel in that work, they boost up their confidence and give more attention towards their goals; resultantly, they are always in positive energy, which motivates them to be more energetic in their work and they will earn name and fame that is a pleasure to their soul.
Moreover, a strong relationship is also a reason for joy. Since the family bond is considered the most vital part of a person’s life, people in good relations always find out ways to be joyful, and to enjoy their time with their loved ones. Hence, the personal and professional life is balanced, even parents support their wards in their hard times to be patient and to move forward. For instance, had my maternal aunt, never gave the advice to open a new café to my cousin after his job was lost, he could not have made his career.
In conclusion, although people differ in their perspectives, I am convinced that there are other ways which make anybody more cheerful and happier due to their interest and strong relation with others.
- Some people believe that personal happiness is directly related to economic success Others believe that there are other factors Discuss both views and give your opinion 80
- Is it good for families if parents need to travel a lot in their job or if they need to move to other cities Is moving to a new location positive for children 91
- Fast food is a part of life in some places Some people think this has bad effects in lifestyle and diet Do you agree or disagree 89
- Some people believe that personal happiness is directly related to economic success while others argue that happiness depends on other factors Discuss both viewpoints and state your view 84
- Is it good for families if parents need to travel a lot in their job or if they need to move to other cities? Is moving to a new location positive for children? 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1788.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 372.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8064516129 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61778825621 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58064516129 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 561.6 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.9580529843 49.4020404114 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.714285714 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5714285714 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92857142857 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127461787934 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0534445799082 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0658917205055 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0886461746227 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0805175664723 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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