Some people believe that radio is the best way to get news while others think that TV is better for this purpose. Discuss both views, give your opinion and relevant examples.
Nowadays there are many ways to get the news about the events, things happening round the world. Few people are of the opinion that radio is the best option, while others think that television is the most excellent way to get the news. In this essay we will discuss both the views and my opinion too.
From the ancient times till today radio has been an effective way to receive the information about the events happening around the world. Radio is a mobile and easy to carry device, these days radio is an embedded feature in many electronic devices like phones and in cars. For instance if a person is travelling and wants to know about things like weather in that particular city or about the entertainment events taking place nearby then they can simply tune into radio and get all the interesting information. Therefore radio is one of the best way to get news and receive information.
As the life evolved, man made progress in every thing they did. And as a result in technological progress television was invented. TV is one step ahead of radio where we can see the picture as well as hear the audio. With TV we can watch the video of the news being telecast-ed about. Consider the example for the biggest flood called Tsunami which the mankind has experienced few years ago, through the videos telecast-ed on TV people were able to learn about the disaster and damaged it has caused. And the purpose of TV is not just limited to news but it is also one of the best form of entertainment at home.
In conclusion, Both radio and television are best ways to receive information about the things occurring around the globe with TV being one step ahead of radio having video feature as well.
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Suggestion: Therefore,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, therefore, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1401.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60855263158 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43909316498 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523026315789 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.4199360481 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.071428571 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7142857143 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21428571429 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276933198488 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101971666023 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0917588967128 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188450479505 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102322525827 0.056905535591 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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