Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child’s development while others think that it is important for children to go to school.
Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion.
Nowadays in this contemporary epoch, many people believe that home-schooling is the best form of education for pupil's development while others tend to believe that children must receive a formal education at school which is essential for their development. In the below paragraphs I will discuss the merits of both sides and put forward my opinion.
First and foremost, homeschooling has a plethora of advantages the most preponderant one is that children can study at their own pace and the study material can be custom-made based on their capabilities and learning ability. Secondly, since the parents know the strengths and weakness of their children it gives an opportunity to guardians to help their children to work on their weakness by lending them moral and emotional support. With the advent of the internet even in the remotest corners of the world where schools are not present homeschooling is being provided by the internet.
On the other hand, it is must in this era of globalization to get a formal education in a school where pupils get exposure and a competitive environment which prepares them for the professional front. To elucidate classroom presentations, sports activities and social environment coupled with skilled teachers at schools prove to be grooming ingredients for children at a tender age. Schooling also teaches children to disciplined and become more social.
Thus, in my opinion, looking at the different facades the advantages of children going to school definitely outweigh homeschooling as the school provides a better environment for children to be groomed and prepares them for future challenges at professional front.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, second, secondly, so, thus, while, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1406.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34600760456 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08514776592 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562737642586 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.9121696713 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.222222222 106.682146367 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.2222222222 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.367657800712 0.244688304435 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140922972148 0.084324248473 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0950599157374 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.232618302349 0.151304729494 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.089290483978 0.056905535591 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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