Crimes and criminals are a great threat to any country, despite the fact that every country is trying to tackle this issue but it actually spreads like a modern day cancer. Some people believe that every crimes should be treated as alike and give equal punishments. However others argue that circumstances of an individual and the motivation for committing it, should also be taken in to the account when giving punishments.
First of all, we can not treat every crime or criminal as same because it is totally unfair. Some crimes are very minor in nature and some are very serious, according to the nature of the crime, the punishment should be given. Secondly, if the authorities impose same punishment to every crimes that may send a bad message to the people who are committing it, because they may think that whatever they do they will get the same punishment. This sometimes encourage them to do more serious unlawful activities. Last but not the lest, some times people are accidentally ran in to crimes because of some they are in to, so law should consider this factor when giving punishments.
On the contrary some people believe that there are no difference between law breakers despite their crime. It is vicious activity, there is no need to classify it as minor or major crimes. Furthermore, people who commit such activities have the same mind set, if the authority give small punishment for their minor crimes, they may take that as an oppertunity and sometimes do more serious crimes. Moreover, only the strict and unanimous punishments should create more fear in the minds of people, so they may think twice before committing even simple crime.
To conclude, crime is a vigorous activity, no matter how or who or what they do. People who do such kind of acts should get what they actually deserve.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 267, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
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Line 5, column 167, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'minors'?
Suggestion: minors
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, kind of, first of all, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1513.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84935897436 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54563663182 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512820512821 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7086821243 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.071428571 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2857142857 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.21428571429 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340387312216 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126094477119 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117624713575 0.0667982634062 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214267654215 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114083880521 0.056905535591 200% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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