Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?
Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. I am one of them to completely relate to this point. Families are recycling things just for the sake of it like they only through things that are least required by them if we say just kitchen food which is leftover from the previous night. To elaborate egg shells, vegetable leaves and fruit pulp left while making fruit juice or jams.
Firstly, it is not the only thing to recycle as empty bottles can also be in this category and even things like plastic bags, paper books and tethered clothes can also be utilised for this purpose.
Secondly everyone should know the difference about the dry and liquid waste even plastic and non-plastic should be recycled separately.
Government should make recycling a legal requirement so everybody should take this cycle as a responsiblity and participate in this so that our surroundings can be clean and fresh. Landfills and drainage problem because of the wastes can be avoided.
For this homemakers should be instructed about the ways of recycling by organising seminars in their localities with the environment workers to make them aware of the benefits of this exercise.
Children are great absorbers of knowledge so they can be a bigger catalyst in this scenario by making them understand about the three R's that is "recycle, reuse and reduce" will surely be a bigger solution to this problem and can make a change in the minds of people.
Sometimes people understand the language of strict penalties and fines so monetary punishment should be given to the rule breakers to make them realise their negligence towards the environment.
In conclusion, recycling is a key solution to one of the biggest environment problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1469.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01365187713 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75218253945 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552901023891 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.0327449005 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.416666667 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4166666667 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261796478532 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106159178034 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0844576645404 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117794462312 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605645687405 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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