Someone has rightly said that – “The car has become an article of dress without which we
feel uncertain, unclad, and incomplete”. In my opinion, the advantages of the car outstrip its
disadvantages.
There are many advantages of car. The most important advantage is that it has given people
freedom of movement. The ease of transportation which a car brings is more than any other
form of transportation. For instance, you can go from destination to destination and no time
is wasted waiting for the bus or train. Therefore, time and distance are not a barrier any
more. What is more, families can go out together. This becomes especially helpful when
there are elderly or the disabled and sick members in the family.
Furthermore, the automobile industry provides jobs to millions of workers. Filling stations,
restaurants, and other businesses that serve automobile travelers are of major importance
to a country’s economy. In addition, many developing nations have begun making
automobiles to boost their economy. That is why India has promoted many automobile
manufacturing industries such as Tata and Mahindra.
On the other hand the disadvantages of the car cannot be overlooked. The increase in
pollution, traffic jams and accidents are the natural sequelae to the burgeoning population
of cars. Moreover, our overdependence on cars can lead to decrease in practices such as
walking and cycling and this has led to a number of diseases such as obesity.
On balance, the advantages to people’s lives and the economic impact created by the car
definitely outweigh the disadvantages. However, we must know when and how-much to use
the car so that we can minimize the demerits to some extent.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, look, moreover, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, such as, in my opinion, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1477.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3321299639 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19986364057 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613718411552 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.0375609519 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.0555555556 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3888888889 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 20.0 4.38176352705 456% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24903227647 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0751833019269 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0756729502242 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0630760914603 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0730293301242 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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