Some people feel that paparazzi should not follow celebrities and invade their privacy by taking pictures of them everywhere, while others believe this is just the price of fame.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Privacy is an essential party of person's life. Private matter should show with the loved ones. Despite bring celebrities, they also need some space. undoubted number of people thinks that this is the price of fame every celebrity has to pay.I strongly disagree with this statement. In this argument first I would give several factors not follow them in situation. Secondly To what extent should they show their affairs.
Being celebrities does not mean "No personal Life". It is their job to entertain people like other human working for breadearn.I agree celebrities' fans are always eager to know about their life, like-dislikes, favourite food and many more. Like us they too have sad and happy moment and they have full right to not to show it to public. In fact a fair amount of people believe that, their life is public property and individual's have full right to follow and click them in every moment. For example if a celebrity is not well or visit a family member in hospital even though media and paparazzi follow them and clicked them which is not correct. Same way if they are out with their offspring, without considering the fact that the light of the camera are not good for kids. They clicked number of pictures.
On the other hand, Being celebrity, followers are concerned about their private affair like to whom they are getting marrying or dating. To some extent they should reveal some details with their fans.For example Salman khan is a famous personality of Bollywood. Multitude from every country are always curious to know when he is getting marry. Reason being he is among the best of actress. People are crazy to have his one look and for that they stand for long hours and even days outside his apartment. So in such situation we can say they should coöperate with the people. Despite that public to give them space for their personal life.
from the above mention facts, I would say both the followers and celebrity both should cop -up with each other.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, second, secondly, so, well, as to, for example, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1657.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81686046512 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32444558019 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552325581395 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.8535448225 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.9047619048 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.380952381 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61904761905 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247278004066 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0708703520939 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05344404744 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160100894885 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.024567766044 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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