Some people feel that paparazzi should not follow celebrities and invade their privacy by taking pictures of them everywhere, while others believe this is just the price of fame.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
although nowadays human think that photographers ought to not follow the famous people and invade their privacy by taking photos of them everywhere they go, however other people have a faith and believe that is the price of fame, in my opinion deciding wherther to keep taking photos and show them to the fans or keep their privacy depends on famous' personality and wishes.
On one hand, some people think it is better to keep the famous' life away from vision, in other words giving them a complete privacy will keep them able to be present everywhere without wondering or being tens looking around, furthermore they will live their life in a way which will makes them feel like other people enjoy, play with their children, and pay from any mall regardless the price and it is place in the country.
On the other hand, it is often believed that over caring of celebrities and taking pictures of them is because they decided and agree to be appear and well shown, and even if their pictures available it is not a detrimental issue, because they like to be on, and get the human's attention which consider to be as a price of fame.
Finally, in my view, both focusing on them or not depends on individual's wishes.However I think they can decide if they want to be well shown by opening many accounts in different applications and start sharing their personal life events, furthermore their family members' photos which will allow and give agreement to the photographers to do their job more effectively. while the other category try as much as they can to make their life private, so that may they work to gain money more that to be popular.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, furthermore, however, if, look, may, so, well, while, i think, in my opinion, in my view, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1357.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66323024055 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4623761636 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518900343643 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 58.0 20.2975951904 286% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 99.5823277495 49.4020404114 202% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 271.4 106.682146367 254% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 58.2 20.7667163134 280% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 26.4 7.06120827912 374% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242865254204 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135837888877 0.084324248473 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606187024979 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157200397511 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494206963039 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.6 13.0946893788 226% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 21.07 50.2224549098 42% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.7 11.3001002004 219% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.64 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 9.78957915832 281% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 25.2 10.1190380762 249% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 25.0 10.7795591182 232% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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