Nowadays some people consider that the opportunities for international travel will be reduced in the near future, There are both pros and cons existed to this trend. In this context I am going to discuss both ways before drawing cogent solution.
Firstly, most of the people are exploring new cultures and traditions with international travelling and they relished the cultural diversity. If the global travelling chances reduced one cannot aware of other cultures. Secondly, Most of the poor countries are depending on the employment of rich countries and onsite opportunities, these travelling barriers will increase the unemployment rate in some countries. Finally, Most of the students are travelling abroad to gain the knowledge in certain areas the changes will impact on young students who wanted to pursue their career in onsite.
On the flip side, there are few advantages with this act, first and foremost one is, few people who travelled to other countries are adopting foreign culture and ignoring their roots and sometimes their kin relatives. Their biological parents and close relatives are living as orphans in old age homes. secondly, some people who experienced this foreign culture and returned to their home countries are unable to adjust with climate and surroundings leads to depression. Finally, this travel will be advantageous for the people who are living in extreme poor conditions and when their government unable to fulfill their basic amenities, they can travel to other countries as refugees and they can gain the benefits.
To sum up, International travel is one good chance to explore ones horizons in broad way,though there are few disadvantages with it. Mostly the people from undeveloped and poor countries are getting advantage with this act. In my perception the global travelling facilities can help the people to live their life to the fullest.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1594.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31333333333 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79140745065 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533333333333 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.2817674778 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.615384615 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0769230769 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61538461538 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148655389662 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0599234507276 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546162864617 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106741384697 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327561192616 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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