Nowadays, there are a few who are in favor of purchasing home grown products while others are keen on foreign products. I completely agree with this opinion and in this essay I will state the reasons for my view.
Predominantly, people favor local home grown products for cultural reasons. This is because they are promoting various indigenous cultures to thrive because of many competitions that they are facing these days. As a result of globalization, small and big industries have to face many obstacles and the least people can do is to support them by buying their products. For instance, famers, textile industries and small scale industries in developing countries rely on local populace to survive. Another reason for this is that people feel the sense of belongingness while they cherish their traditions and values. Eventually, this is reflected in their spending patterns.
On the other hand, there are people who opt for foreign products mainly due to the fact that they can obtain discounts leading to cost savings. It is basic human nature to save money wherever possible. When they purchase these products they are benefitted in multiple ways. Several multinational companies offer various discounts as they are able to offer products at much lower prices and also entice clients with freebies. Eventually, some people gravitate towards these products. Moreover, these products are not only cheap but also are of superior quality. Hence, leading to spike in their sales. For example, people are now able to eat exotic fruits that were either not available or extremely expensive to afford. Therefore, now they are able to enjoy wide variety of quality foods.
In conclusion, while both the preferences co-exist in society due to the above stated reasons, I personally believe there are legitimate benefits to people. This is because people who prefer cost savings or those who promote traditions and cultural values can achieve their goals accordingly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...nature to save money wherever possible. When they purchase these products they are b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, hence, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1665.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2523659306 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66953774065 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570977917981 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.6093051491 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.6315789474 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6842105263 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.10526315789 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210852853142 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0593952773238 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487376244521 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121284263028 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00575328260233 0.056905535591 10% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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