People have different views about whether or not living in a house is better than an apartment. Although I accept that living in an apartment is much cheaper, but a house has more benefits that an apartment cannot compare to.
For a variety of reason, the house’s owner has more privacy than flat’s owner. Firstly, living in a small place like an apartment lead to the sharing of facilities such as the hall and laundry room. Secondly, the house owner could be more flexible in term of noise at the late time of day. For example, some people working late and willing to take shower at midnight, however, the sound of water from their activity might cause their neighbour’s inconvenience. Finally, a house normally provides more space for outdoor activity, hence it is better for owner’s health.
In my opinion, living in an apartment is a good choice for student or people with low income. The main purpose of building an apartment is relocating people from rural suburb to the city with the minimising area. It acts as a place that some families can live in the same area as a house, so the fee to living here is lower. The aim of the apartment is reducing the cost and saving area so the low-income family could be able to afford. As a result, for people those could not pay for the house, an apartment provides them with the solution for living budget.
In conclusion, while living in a house have more advantages than in an apartment, it is the only choice for some people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 36, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
People have different views about whether or not living in a house is better than an apa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1238.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67169811321 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61414396409 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528301886792 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 21.7821380599 49.4020404114 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 95.2307692308 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3846153846 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9230769231 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.502018536964 0.244688304435 205% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.189818029639 0.084324248473 225% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123879123252 0.0667982634062 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.350040751812 0.151304729494 231% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0971115589463 0.056905535591 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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