In this contemporary world of modernization, two types of accommodations, namely houses and apartments, are common among people. Although, some individuals prefer to occupy homes, others choose flats to live in. This essay will discuss as to why living in homes is more advantageous than occupying flats.
Certain people are inclined towards home-accommodation because of its bigger area covering a large number of bedrooms and bathrooms, a yard and plenty of space in general. Moreover, a house owner, unlike an apartment dweller, has a freedom to convert the space into whatever he or she wants; depending upon the situation. For instance; folks who throw frequent parties can entertain their friends and family by utilizing this empty space to arrange barbecue. In addition, the prices of a house and its land increases manifold while most of the flats offer no significant return on investment. That is why; people are more interested in buying a house rather than apartments.
However, another bunch of people are in favor of settling in flats as there prices are always less than a home; allowing the younger generation to have their own property from their own salary. For example, the salary packages are generally low nowadays, which makes it difficult for people to earn their living sites. Due to low cost of flats, such folks are able to buy them and live a generous life. Moreover, flats are constructed in over less area as compared to that of houses making the process of their cleanliness less time consuming from the hectic schedules of working professionals. Thus, individuals prefer to live in flats.
In conclusion, this essay discussed as to why some prefer to live in houses while others choose flats. However, in my opinion, living in a house is always more advantageous than any other type of accommodation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 92, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ion because of its bigger area covering a large number of bedrooms and bathrooms, a yard and plen...
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Line 2, column 230, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'freedom'.
Suggestion: freedom
...owner, unlike an apartment dweller, has a freedom to convert the space into whatever he o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in general, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1533.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0761589404 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8679797943 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582781456954 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6324659637 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.2 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1333333333 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.86666666667 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.347599323677 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123106060772 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0983101715634 0.0667982634062 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229694648317 0.151304729494 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104782961931 0.056905535591 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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