Some people have a perspective that advertisements lure us to purchase goods that are not of necessity. But, others are of
People are in a dilemma regarding the impact of advertisement on their life .It is undeniable that by using advertising people purchase useless things, however , I agree with the idea that promotion is a great way to ameliorate our life.
On the one hand, although modern information technologies can reduce the demand for advertising agencies by facilitating internet and gadgets, the requirement for advertisement continues to increase. Increasing competition between companies lead to the release of new technologies and high quality products which informs customers about their products and services. For example after promotion of organic markets which were organised in Azerbaijan, people commenced to tend to buy healthy products. If people gain any information about products widely, it give them more chance to choose suitable and affordable one.
On the other hand ,as far as advertisement is concerned enhancing due to a large advertising industry employers and developing of its subject in universities. There are several scientists and employers are in a co- operation to improve this field .For instance Nero marketing is one of the modern sphere which offer several opportunities in the future .If people deeply learn any subject , it bring to perfect life and involves in numerous employees to land job in this area.
To sum up, although advertisement lure us to buy products that we are not need, we should overestimate it by obtaining convenient data and consequence of developing this area might lead to vacant places for employees.
- Traffic and accommodation problems are increasing and government should encourage businesses to move from cities to rural areas. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? 76
- The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children's charity located in the USA spent and received in one year.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 61
- The pie graphs below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years.pie comparison 67
- Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your 56
- Task1: The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children's charity located in the USA spent and received in one year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, regarding, for example, for instance, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1311.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37295081967 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0969020702 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631147540984 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.8819297904 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 163.875 106.682146367 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5 20.7667163134 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.875 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 34.0 5.01903807615 677% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230909006463 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0949229497513 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400897835134 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134548402559 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0299878946459 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.1 13.0946893788 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 50.2224549098 65% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.46 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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