A tremendous development has been occured in technological advancement and electronic communication all over the world during the past decade. Although, there are giant irriversible change notified, i certainly believe that, existance of traditional newspapers and magazines might never be eradicated.
E-books and technological advancements are almost captured the communication media. To bigin with, new technologies made easy access to the communication and education. For example, internet access and specifically designed mobile apps are helpful in improving knowledge. Moreover, it is more materialistic. It reduces the laboures hardwork and struggle. Because, people have to wait hours together to get a specific information during its transportation.
On the other hand, newspaper and magazines are good medium to improve the reading habit in young adults. Reading well improve the emagination and thinking process as a mean of brain storming. Newspapers and books leading breadwinning for local sellers. For example, some shops are only designed to sell papers.
To sum up, i believe that all communication medium's are essential to the development of next generation. Although, new technologies are strongly helpful in education and communication, old ways are minimally essential.
- People should work a fixed number of hours per week, and employers should not ask anybody to work more than this. Do you agree or disagree? Give your own opinion. 84
- The chart below shows the amount of time that 10 to 15 year olds spend chatting on the Internet and playing on games consoles on an average school day in the UK 68
- Politicians are more responsible for protection of the environment than individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 61
- The line graph shows thefts per thousand vehicles in four European countries between 1990 and 1999. 11
- summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 54
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 356, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ces the laboures hardwork and struggle. Because, people have to wait hours together to ...
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Line 7, column 12, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... designed to sell papers. To sum up, i believe that all communication mediums ...
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Line 7, column 69, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l communication mediums are essential to the development of next generation. Alth...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, well, for example, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1113.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 187.0 315.596192385 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.95187165775 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.3881215208 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.673796791444 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 354.6 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.3348043893 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.5 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3571428571 20.7667163134 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64285714286 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13546026673 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0405310374579 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0378927440347 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0731415371786 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0292416115899 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.9 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.64 12.4159519038 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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