We are living in the era where things are judge by their appearance, like all the gudgets meant with eye catching look, likewise, nowadays few people belive that clothing style
of a person can represnt enormous information about his or her personality and culture. As per my opinion I am strongly disagree on this statement, beacuse there are many other factors which should be consider to make any final image about a person, like communictaion skills, knowledge etc.
In this essay I will dicuss my views in details.
Firstly, There is no doubt that it is quite common that people are mainly judge by their clothes. If someone is wearing a latest dress as per fashion it gives an advantage to attract the others, and give an advantage. for an imstance, For a business meeting one should wear professional clothes so it will give an impression that the person is well educated and have sound knowledge of specific field.
Even though, Some companies has rule for their empolyee to wear only formal clothes during office hours, as they have belive that well-dressed empolyee will represnt the culture of the company.
On the other hand, There are few examples, which make mentioned statement as a fallacy, if we take the example of sucessful businessman or a person, and look into their dressing style we will be shocked that they wear casual dress.
Another example is many children belongs to poor financial families still they are excellent in their study, then it will be totally wrong to make a perception that only well dress children are good in study.
So to conclude, As I mentioned in this essay clothes are not an accurate scale to measure the character or culture of a person. One should be judge on his or her deed and rule what he or she is playing in our society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, likewise, look, so, still, then, well, no doubt, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1482.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7652733119 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52013736076 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56270096463 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.9269137741 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.727272727 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2727272727 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.81818181818 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132692195909 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0519144241493 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450221458075 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.054512677264 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033173211875 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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