Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?
Clothes selection according to many individuals is the best method to know more about others' traditions and personalities. This issue is extremely debatable as it's from my point of view, depend on the situation that wear it for. This essay aims to highlight such issue in further detail and before coming to a conclusion.
Firstly, there is no doubt that lots of styles are obtained by several old cultures and being dressed in to show other communities , how much the local people are proud of their historical tradition. For example, Saudi Arabia citizens usually wear their national dress called Thoub in different events especially outside the country, in terms of showing their proudness of their old heritages. Secondly, it's irrefutable that choosing clothes is being relied on people preferences and personalities. For instance, dynamic individuals who are spending all of their times moving around and can not be able to set down, they seemingly tend to get comfortable clothes that facilitate their daily movement. Moreover, other people who love to be distinguished among other are always following the latest fashion style.
In contrast, undoubtedly that not all dresses codes are suitable for various occasions and places. So, some people might force to follow and even honor the given rules about the dress codes. To illustrate, most of workers particularly in an international companies are being instructed about the preferable dress codes during the office official hours. Therefore, they can not wear anything might be related to their traditions. Furthermore, women in some places should pursue and respect the rules that imposed by the places they are visit. Saudi Arabia as an example, put some measurements on women clothes inside the nation. Thus, what ever if being accepted or not visitors should respect it as it is.
In conclusion, clothes might be the one of the best way to find out people preferences, however, not all styles are applicable to be dressed. Therefore, clothes style is not always accurate parameter about people's thoughts
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1748.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26506024096 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76415945894 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590361445783 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0043662255 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.823529412 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5294117647 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.05882352941 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130620878317 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0420148735975 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0320927537692 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0738305424594 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.027325342254 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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