Some people say that it’s possible to tell a lot about person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree? | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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Some people say that it’s possible to tell a lot about person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?

Clothes selection according to many individuals is the best method to know more about others' traditions and personalities. This issue is extremely debatable as it's from my point of view, depend on the situation that wear it for. This essay aims to highlight such issue in further detail and before coming to a conclusion.   Firstly, there is no doubt that lots of styles are obtained by several old cultures and being dressed in to show other communities , how much the local people are proud of their historical tradition. For example, Saudi Arabia citizens usually wear their national dress called Thoub in different events especially outside the country, in terms of showing their proudness of their old heritages. Secondly, it's irrefutable that choosing clothes is being relied on people preferences and personalities. For instance, dynamic individuals who are spending all of their times moving around and can not be able to set down,  they seemingly tend to get comfortable clothes that facilitate their daily movement. Moreover, other people who love to be distinguished among other are always following the latest fashion style.  In contrast, undoubtedly that not all dresses codes are suitable for various occasions and places. So, some people might force to follow and even honor the given rules about the dress codes.  To illustrate, most of workers particularly in an international companies are being instructed about the preferable dress codes  during the office official hours. Therefore, they can not wear anything might be related to their traditions. Furthermore, women in some places should pursue and respect the rules that imposed by the places they are visit. Saudi Arabia as an example, put some measurements on women clothes inside the nation. Thus, what ever if being accepted or not visitors should respect it as it is.  
In conclusion, clothes might be the one of the best  way to find out people preferences, however, not all styles are applicable to be dressed. Therefore, clothes style is not always accurate parameter about people's thoughts

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 345, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...s. This issue is extremely debatable as its from my point of view, depend on the si...
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Line 1, column 1057, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ing dressed in to show other communities , how much the local people are proud of ...
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Line 1, column 1541, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , &nbsp
...g around and can not be able to set down, they seemingly tend to get comfortable...
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Line 1, column 2286, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'following'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'force' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: following
...and places. So, some people might force to follow and even honor the given rules about th...
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Line 1, column 2371, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the workers') or simply say ''most workers''.
Suggestion: most of the workers; most workers
...t the dress codes. To illustrate, most of workers particularly in an international compan...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, no doubt

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3038.0 1615.20841683 188% => OK
No of words: 426.0 315.596192385 135% => OK
Chars per words: 7.13145539906 5.12529762239 139% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54310108192 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 5.38708375874 2.80592935109 192% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514084507042 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 807.3 506.74238477 159% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 189.486487352 49.4020404114 384% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 202.533333333 106.682146367 190% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2666666667 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167358040694 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636195345688 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426815215753 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149692258767 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0177943572625 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.4 13.0946893788 202% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 17.68 50.2224549098 35% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.8 11.3001002004 158% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 24.37 12.4159519038 196% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 24.0 9.78957915832 245% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 24.0 10.7795591182 223% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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