Music is the only form of art, regardless of varieties of cultural backgrounds and generation gaps, that promotes everyone to find something in common. From my perspective, there is nothing in the world can compare with it in above aspects.
To begin with, music is definitely a huge blessing for the communication of the residents in different countries to understand each other. For example, popular songs are played everywhere transverse the barriers of languages, for people just care about the marvelous melodies and amazing rhythms. Some of them such as Heal the world, Memory and so on arises the listeners' emotion and attitudes so well that they cannot help to get rid of the influences. Other than that, those tones and tunes play an indispensable role of igniting the curiosity and enthusiasm to explore where they are from as well as the real meanings hidden in the lyrics, facilitating the mutual understanding among different areas.
As for the ageism, it never seems like a hurdle restricting us from appreciating music. On the one hand, no matter how big the gap between generations, few of them can refuse the charm and appeal from the successful ones survived in the process of transmitting. Because these notes represent no only the harmony of the themes, but also touch the souls especially for classical ones from Batch , Beethoven and Vigor’s. All those works are valueless legacy of the whole mankind with no doubt. Besides, the popularity itself is circular progress. What used to be welcomed are generally conquering the generations born after decades of years, which have been verified by numerous cases. That is why nostalgic styles are usually immortal.
However, some music may fail to achieve the same level of success and they tend to be accepted by comparably small groups should not exert any impacts on the majority's taste.
In the light of the above discussions, music never fails to fascinate human beings and will always overcome the dilemmas in front of us,let alone mere different cultures and ages. Even if there are some exceptions, it is impossible to change this truth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, may, so, thus, well, as for, for example, no doubt, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1780.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08571428571 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75952657015 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654285714286 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 562.5 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6064580415 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.25 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.875 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4375 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128410151884 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0363555673189 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0294001309771 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0679995186834 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0276020939786 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.