Some people say a person’s success in adult life is the result of the way they brought up as a child by their parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is said that success in mature life is the outcome of fostering of a child by their parents. I completely disagree with this statement. To become successful in life, talent and hard work is important.
Without talent, is it impossible to achieve the target in life? For example, Bill Gates has talent, so he has become a successful entrepreneur. In his childhood, he had not receive much help from his parents, but he got early age success. In addition, John Milton, an English poet, who was an orphan and from a poor family, yet he became a remarkable poet in English literature. So, merit is an important element to triumph something in life.
What is the key to get success in life? A question is always asked by many people. The answer is hard work. Not only to become successful in mature age, but also to get it in teenage, there is no alternative to give effort. Mark Zuckerburg, the owner of facebook, is a good example of this. Before him many people have just given idea about this social media platform, but Mark has launched it for the world with his long time effort and become successful. Though his parents wanted to make him to involve him in their family business, Mark was not interested at all. Overall, if the target is correct, then it is not impossible to achieve that and childhood fostering or parents role is very limited in this case.
In conclusion, ability and great effort is the result of a person’s success. In my opinion, Parent functions only as a guide for a successful man. Early age facilities have little effect regarding achievements of a winner.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 174, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'received'.
Suggestion: received
...repreneur. In his childhood, he had not receive much help from his parents, but he got ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, regarding, so, then, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1322.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68794326241 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68638964064 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581560283688 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.243229878 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.5789473684 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8421052632 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.73684210526 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157613010322 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0537231736873 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662610166546 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11261018321 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0615375945543 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 13.0946893788 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.33 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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