Without any doubt, society is divided into two groups as per the distinct mindset of different people. therefore, this has become a debatable issue whether join a health club or habit of using stairs instead of elevators. This essay will not only shed light on both perceptions but also my point of view will be elaborated in conclusion.
To commence with the first notion, there are myriad things to shared in its favor, first of all, after joining to Gym, we have a responsibility to attend regularly because of advance payments and moreover, there is a proper schedules with adequate training for new bees especially from expert trainers. Consequently, we create a punctuality to do daily exercise to maintain good health as well as benefitted to do not become obese due to unhealthy fast food diets especially younger people. the second point is health club membership is good for those who do not have a chance for entertainment or sports and games facilities of staying the students residing in metro cities.
Moving towards the second argument of this debate daily routines are enough, to exemplify it, some people walks too long while they are doing their job furthermore using bicycle to reach office that helps their body more active as well save money of not using public transport system or own vehicle. Apart from this, everyone can save both time and money of practicing of not using transport if it is possible, also helps environment from carbon emissions.
In conclusion, according to my perspective, selecting the best is the call of individual responsibility and convenience although always be touch and friendly with nature to be healthy and long life instead of using modern facilities.
- Our personalities are predetermined as a result of our genes before we are born and there is nothing that can be done to alter our character traits.To what extent do you agree? 61
- Some people think that youngsters should get involved in unpaid work while others oppose as it may affect their career Discuss both the sides and give your opinion Give reasons for your answer and include and relevant examples 84
- The office where you work does not have a proper car park Write a letter to your manager and say Explain the problem of no parking space available Suggest a solution for the car park problem Explain how this will help your company 73
- Some people think that children should start primary school later in life others think that they should start it before 7 Discuss both views and give your opinion 61
- Some people think traveling abroad is a valuable experience for young people Others think it wastes too much time and expense Discuss both views and give your opinion 89
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, well, while, apart from, in conclusion, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1433.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04577464789 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74823661701 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644366197183 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.496870345 49.4020404114 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 159.222222222 106.682146367 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.5555555556 20.7667163134 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.2222222222 7.06120827912 230% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138284167866 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.050794183998 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0352641724365 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.068489318907 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0293346519199 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.0946893788 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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