Some people think certain prisoners should be made to do unpaid community work instead of being put behind bars.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Not all of the crimes are equal; therefore not all the crimes should be punished the same, it would be absurd to put someone in prison for a lifetime if they pickpocket and equally as silly to write a ticket to someone who killed three people. The punishment needs to fit the crime for it to be appropriate and reasonable. I completely agree that certain prisoners should be made to do unpaid community work instead of being put behind bars.
Firstly, no one is born criminal; it is the circumstances that force people to break the laws in the society. As an example, a young boy would steal a pack of milk from a grocery store to feed his starving family, and one must see such offense differently from the severe ones. Such convicted prisoners should be entitled to serve the unpaid community work instead of being put behind bars, and this community works will not only give them a chance of correcting themselves but also society will not look at them as criminals.
Secondly, if first-time offenders of low-level crime are put together with the other convicts who have performed some severe crime such as murder, rape, terror attack; the mere possibility of them getting influenced by such criminal cannot be overruled. And further to correct their low-level crime and to ensure that they do not engage with such act of crime in future, the community service is the suitable punishment.
To conclude, laws are made to maintain peace and harmony in the society and not to punish people. Distinguishing of crime level should be done. High-level offense - high-level punishment; smaller offense must be given a chance to do unpaid service which will serve as a path for improvement and live an ordinary life again.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
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Line 1, column 174, Rule ID: EQUALLY_AS[1]
Message: Don't say 'equally as'. You can use either 'equally' or 'as' on its own. When comparing two nouns, use 'just as'.
Suggestion: equally; as; just as
...n for a lifetime if they pickpocket and equally as silly to write a ticket to someone who ...
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Line 5, column 361, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...ey do not engage with such act of crime in future, the community service is the suitable ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8277027027 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63646468753 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547297297297 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.5669124841 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.909090909 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9090909091 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343079074895 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145076518817 0.084324248473 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.187081804631 0.0667982634062 280% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202279036753 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110428180235 0.056905535591 194% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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