There have been different arguments regarding the age of children should begin with their elementary class. while some individuals say that after the age of seven is effective. I would agree that it would be better at a young age
On the one hand, there are several advantages to starting school at an early age. to enumerate, at schools, interacting with other children makes them develop the skill of confidence to a certain extent communication between children enhancing them to gain esteem and problem-solving skills. moreover, since this age child grasps matters more swiftly because their brain and mind are free of chores which aid to maintain discipline life from a small age until becoming aged
On the other hand, although, delaying primary school provides mental health benefits to children allowing them to better self regulate their attention and hyperactivity levels when they do start school. there is no difference when a child can begin to read at any age. However, age will surpass when they to achieve a job which feels low esteem among their age groups. because late starters tend to finish a school a year later this is a major issue hen they should have higher earnings at a younger age. since wages depend on human capital, they depend on skills acquired in school and skills developed through work experience after schooling.
In conclusion, although age is an important factor in learning, I would feel that early ages of children are a beneficial time to enroll in school.
- You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six year old child Write a letter to the parents In your letter explain why you would like the job give details of why you would 73
- It is a natural process for animal species to become extinct e g Dinosaur dodos There is no reason why people should try to prevent this from happening Do you agree or disagree 67
- In many cities planners have separated schools homes shops and offices into specific areas which are widely separated from each other Do you think the advantages of this policy outweigh the disadvantages for city residents 89
- Our personalities are predetermined as a result of our genes before we are born and there is nothing that can be done to alter our character traits.To what extent do you agree? 61
- Some people think that the best way to become successful in life is to get a university education whereas others say this is no longer true discuss these views and opinion 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 109, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
...ould begin with their elementary class. while some individuals say that after the age...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 83, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: To
...ges to starting school at an early age. to enumerate, at schools, interacting with...
^^
Line 2, column 293, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Moreover
...gain esteem and problem-solving skills. moreover, since this age child grasps matters mo...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 204, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
...ivity levels when they do start school. there is no difference when a child can begin...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 370, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Because
...eels low esteem among their age groups. because late starters tend to finish a school a...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 370, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...eels low esteem among their age groups. because late starters tend to finish a school a...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 506, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Since
... have higher earnings at a younger age. since wages depend on human capital, they dep...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, regarding, so, while, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1254.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99601593625 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6136915711 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613545816733 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.1322301999 49.4020404114 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.4 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.7 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151843680203 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0603342778648 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385063973928 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0901602009903 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0432165812993 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.