Some people think that government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere.
To what extent do you agree with this view?
The scarce group of residents assume that authority is not utilizing government funds appropriately. Investing on arts is unbeneficial; however, this capital ought to be use on other requisite sectors. I completely disagree with the above notion. This essay considers the importance of arts in human’s lives.
Firstly, to begin with, if we analyse our surroundings, we will witness that arts is everywhere exhibiting a lavish painting hang on the wall or appreciating our coffee in an ambiance environment of café shop we cannot get rid of it. Art has influenced the personality development traits of human beings. Arts support sustainable environment for living creatures on this planet called Earth. Arts spread colors in life and help people to eliminate boredom form their life’s. Arts promote various enriched cultures to mingle and connect inhabitants around the globe socially.
Secondly, Arts promoted adolescents in flourishing their cognitive and innovative skills, which enhanced confidence and steadiness. It is witnessed that child engrossed in any kind of arts activities ranging from painting, music, sculpture or dancing are more confident and successful in both personnel and professional life.
Thirdly, the abundant group of people has contradictory opinion on this concept. Despite of the fact that other obligatory sectors ought to be precedence over arts like enhanced hospitals, schools, infrastructure, which persuade superior quality of living standards.
To sum up, Nevertheless, if a balanced approached is adapted and practiced by both government and citizens to foster a robust living environment. Requisite initials steps should be taken and develop obligatory policies, standards and laws, which should incorporate adoption and awareness of arts in human’s life are as indispensable as other vitals sectors for living organisms.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 481, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...iminate boredom form their life's. Arts promote various enriched cultures to mi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, kind of, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1613.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.78136200717 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1653839343 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659498207885 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.4678624693 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.533333333 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159536217775 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0567423463961 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0358442647193 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.088975611029 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473448521613 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.24 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.3 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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