It is argued that ruling government should invest money in other sectors rather than in art industry. I completely disagree with this notion as it a one of career stream all around world as well as it helps in preserving our culture and heritage.
First of all, to visualize and preserve the incredible talent of the country artist, government is supporting the art industry by constructing museums, art gallery, exhibition center, heritage sites etc. People who are interested to visit these places either free of cost or with some entry charges. The cost of maintenance is undertaken by the government. Moreover, this increase the level of interest among people. For instance, a recent study found that many sites in European countries are taken by UNESCO as heritage sites, hence huge volume of tourist are attracted in the current year.
Secondly, there are many forms of arts like music, dance, film industry which are considered lucrative and main source of entertainment for the generation. The number of educated professionals are employed all around the world in the different art industry which supports their livelihood and provide them career growth. In the current stressful and fast paced life, watching movies with friends and family relax our mind and body. Nowadays, different language has their own film industry like English in Hollywood, Hindi in Bollywood, Telugu in Tollywood.
Therefore, I can safely conclude that government encouragement in art industry helps thousands of people to retain their livelihood who choose it as career. Art industry is a major stream and it require finance for maintenance and exposure.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 150, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'careers'?
Suggestion: careers
...etain their livelihood who choose it as career. Art industry is a major stream and it ...
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Line 7, column 196, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'requires'?
Suggestion: requires
.... Art industry is a major stream and it require finance for maintenance and exposure. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for instance, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1389.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28136882129 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76336144772 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608365019011 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7738945738 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.846153846 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2307692308 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07692307692 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146761887556 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0490583639075 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0402747321503 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0938722104348 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0492229245785 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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