Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Indubitably, climate changes have drastic effects on mankind yet it is often argued that humans should not try to encounter these effects because it will give the adverse side-effects of stopping the environmental changes. However, people can try to avoid weather changes or must try to live in horrible situations. And, I concur with this notion.
Evidently, the more climate alters, the more life becomes harder. That is the theory that defines and gave a message to the people to adapt themselves to the present climate within millions of years, as a result, they cannot live easily with increased temperature. As a strategic method, individuals can plant trees to decrease global warming effects, which is an ongoing problem over the past more than two decades. Planting more trees will reduce the effect of global warming because trees will able to absorb carbon-di-oxide which is one of the prime reasons for temperature risen on our mother Earth. Apart from this, high concentrations of carbon-di-oxide can damage human body cells and eventually leads to death. For instance, a recent rise in temperature in Canada has presented a negative outcome of giving multiple humans deaths because of high temperature. This only happened because of the global warming effect which can be taken as a climatic change effect in Canada.
Moreover, the rise in pollution because of the high consumption of fossil fuels that have increased the atmospheric pollutants as well as weather temperature. Such observation can be seen with the melting of glaciers in the north and south poles. Therefore, for preventing weather changes, the consumption of fossil fuels must be reduced. I think it can be reduced by humans to decrease the effect of atmospheric pollutants happens. Besides, there are other ways to prevent climatic changes, but in some situations, people can also adapt themselves to difficult environmental conditions not easily but hardly.
To conclude, in my viewpoint, the enhancement of afforestation and reduction of fossil fuels can help humankind to avoid weather changes. These two possible solutions can sustain the life on Earth longer without any trouble.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 603, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[3]
Message: The adverb 'hardly' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
...environmental conditions not easily but hardly. To conclude, in my viewpoint, the e...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, apart from, for instance, i think, as a result, as well as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1835.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30346820809 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89014017322 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546242774566 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 572.4 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9881646892 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.941176471 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3529411765 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88235294118 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114630623889 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0402156237597 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456414185114 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0679616227023 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043183574947 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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