Opinion is divided when it comes to deciding what is the best to do with money. Some claim that one should live up, buy cars and just enjoy the time. Others, in the opposite, point out that it would be wiser to save money and to purchase only items that are strictly necessary to face up to everyday life.
In this essay I will take under examination those two different stances, trying to evaluate the plus and the minus.
People who sustain the idea that money is basically made to be spent, tend to live their life day-to-day and in despite of the fact that some difficulties can occur, they prefer to invest their revenues in hining cars, luxury items, big houses and trips around the world. There is nothing wrong with it, provided that other duties, like paying mortgages and having enough financial resources to guarantee a future for the children, are accomplished.
On the other hand, some people prefer to have a wary attitude toward spending money which means that they give priority to protect savings. Many families choose to invest in mortgage in order to become houseowner or for those who have familiarity with the financial world, there are plenty of possibilities to select from, which can increase significantly the initial investment.
From my point view, a cautios managment of money would be the best way to follow, since no one can know what could happen over the years and it is always good to have some money for rainy days.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1206.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74803149606 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37444336129 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633858267717 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.353192099 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.0 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2222222222 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.77777777778 7.06120827912 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251093889614 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0961688921626 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594676461396 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116124685862 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0629012077478 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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