Nowadays gender variation increases. Some parents believe that for the better education they admitted their children into separate Institutes, others disagree with this, and they think that obtained a better study if children enrolled in mixed schools or colleges, but I understood that attaining good knowledge along with the better future, only possible by the mixed institution.
Some people avoid gender bias and are permitted their children acquiring an education in mixed colleges or schools, for instance, my brother's son Mahesh, he was studying 9th grade, in the last exams he got first prize. I enquired him, he described me that he likes to do hard work with his classmate girl, Ramya, who is the top-ranked in the school. On the other hand, some boys might be attracted to girls, it leads to unable to focus on studies in this current situation as the parents have to identify a cause and solve it immediately.Finally, it may diverse.
Moreover, some girls might be achieved good results if they are in separate Institution, for example, my neighbor's daughter selected for National quiz competition then I enquired her, she told me that she is studying in an Educational-institution. On the other hand, some girls who are obtained a degree in opposite-sex universities then they unable to socialize with males in the society, this is the major problem, such as, in my Colony two girls unable to go out without their father support.
In my opinion, by comparison of above both statements, more advantages might get if studied in a combined institution, whereas fewer merits achieve in separate institutions.
- Some people believe that is better to live and work in a vertical city with multiple tall buildings, as compared to an horizontal city with fewer tall buildings. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 84
- The chart below shows information about the challenges people face when they go to live in other countries.. 78
- The pie charts below show information on the highest level of education of women in Someland in 1945 and 1995. 78
- Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 78
- Wild animals have no place in the 21st century, so protecting them is a waste of resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 539, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Finally
...entify a cause and solve it immediately.Finally, it may diverse. Moreover, some girl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, may, moreover, so, then, whereas, for example, for instance, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1362.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13962264151 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08657562554 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611320754717 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.2502749262 49.4020404114 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 170.25 106.682146367 160% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.125 20.7667163134 160% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.875 7.06120827912 225% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208859848928 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0778502829924 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417782754969 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119439412969 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0235748543187 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.3 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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